coloring and pose practice...

So here's my critique of Victini:
The pose: Victini seems a little fat... It's okay but if it's the case then you forgot to draw the torso (the torso have to be smaller than the belly, draw one small circle on the top and a big circle on the bottom like this sta.sh/04qtri8sn1i ) and also the belly needs to be a lil bit rounder and less lose like a water drop.
For the legs I cannot really help with words so I did a tutorial sta.sh/01whhtlym1o1 also the feeth are red.
For the arms, the shoulders are between the start of the torso and the neck and need to be seen like this sta.sh/026ihkqv45dy
For the ears You should not draw only one you need the other one to be seen. Also they are too advenced and Victini has his ears open on the side not on the front like this sta.sh/01sdw2zoxo4n
Also the don't close too much the frontiere between the neck and the head, just add one a line on the chin.
The shading and colors: you need to add more red like on the paws and the feeth like victini has and add also more shades on the back the wings... Ect...
also you didn't drew the shadow of the wings on the grass

Also for the hole pic I recommends you another type of lightening than white. (It will be hard to explain because I don't think we have the same thing) after you colored your character keep this color and go to the color set, then you move the cursor in "S:" to make a washed color, when you choosed it you return in "B:" and move the cursor to make a light color. 

Sorry for taking a lot of time. Are you ready for Ki's critique ?